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Well dear, I am not too good myself but still don't you think you're chapters are moving like a bullet train,  I mean you should let the reader wrap themselves in your story, but your story is like a really moving fast,  reader can’t even get what they are reading.

I have decided Im going to start over from a new account so if you like the things I write Abt and wtv then I suggest you go and follow it (if u wanna) but it would greatly be appreciated and I'm willing to do any requests you might have for me!!! Thx for listening to my little rant <3

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