Edenstudent

@SuperWeRT153 I'm sorry, man.  My cousins are about to go through the same thing in a week or two.  I'll be praying for you.
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doomseed

I read the lets speak English book and like the concept of comic style. I am rather intrigued about the concept but am wondering if there is a method that allows multiple comics perchapter

Edenstudent

Unfortunately, I had trouble putting more than 1 picture into each chapter.  But it worked out well in the end since for each chapter she wrote a little blip.  Thanks a lot for checking it out, I hoped you liked it.  I you want to read more, I plan to update it soon, or you can check out the site it comes from, www.marycagle.com
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Edenstudent

@Soa_Soraya  no problem. So far it is a great story and very exciting, albeit slightly confusing. Thank you for replying to my comment.  I think I am getting the story, and it is interesting how you drop the reader right in the middle.  It may just be me, but I am the kind of person who wonders "How did the world get like this? Where do (or did) their powers come from? What happened to Psych's family?" (you don't have to answer these). But don't get me wrong, the story as it is still holds a full completeness to it and is very paced, very enjoyable.  Umm... I have started a story called "bonds of ice" and only have about 10K words so far, but maybe if you have some time this month or the next, maybe could you give it a glance?  I have not been able to get any feed back on it yet.  So thank you for the reply and I apologize for the length of this message.
          *smiles and wishes he had a flashy ending for his messages*

Soa_Soraya

@Edenstudent I'm delighted to hear that you're enjoying it! 
            
            Looking back on Psych now as a (hopefully) more experienced writer, I can honestly admit that it confuses me as well. If all goes according to plan, I'll be able to rewrite it someday and address many of the concerns that readers and I have with the original.
            
            Those are all excellent questions! Most of them are answered in later chapters, so I won't spoil anything, but I hope that you'll enjoy the answers when they arrive.
            
            Ah, I certainly understand the desire for feedback. I've added your story to my reading list so that I can read it when the Wi-Fi here is not lagging so terribly. 
            
            You're more than welcome and thank you as well! A message (of any length) is always a delight to receive. *Smiles and bows*
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