Edgerunner_

Chapter 11 and 12 of Onyx City is now out. Please give the story a chance you might really like it :)

Edgerunner_

Hello!!
          
          A double update for you, on the newly renamed Onyx City (FKA Ashes of Onyx) I just think Onyx City suits the name of the story better.
          
          Anyway, buckle up because in this update we meet a new character, and I am very excited about it!

Wing_Swiper

Hey! I read a bit of your story, Ashes of Onyx, and I wanna give a bit of advice. (Totally no pressure, though. Just a personal opinion) 
          You’ve got a lot of talent as a writer. Like, a lot. The way you tie words together and describe stuff — it’s spectacular. You’ve got the makings of a great writer, honestly.
          But I think you need to figure out what kind of impact you want your stories to have of people. Negative or positive? A story about a city where people are sliced open and where filth and grime and fear rule? … Not exactly positive. Don’t get me wrong: I love all the futuristic weaponry, B’s awesome character and the way you managed to envision Onyx City. It’s awesome.
          Just, use your talent to impact people in a good way, y’know? Inspire them and give them a feeling while reading your story they will NEVER forget.
          All that: just advice, girl. You’ve got a brilliant talent, and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.

Edgerunner_

@Wing_Swiper Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story and provide your feedback. It is appreciated!
            
            I guess this story is not everyone's cup of tea, and I'm okay with that. But I do appreciate your honesty - I will keep it in mind as I continue to write the story :) 
            
            And thank you for the kind words about my writing ability - it's been a couple years so I was feeling a bit rusty!
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Edgerunner_

Chapter Five: Disasterpiece, and Chapter Six: Point Blank, of Ashes of Onyx are out now!
          
          AND it is climbing the ranks in the Dystopian tag! I'm so excited! Please read and vote, it means the world and helps me out so much! Thank you!

Edgerunner_

Hi my friends. It has been a while! life has been crazy, but the urge to write again has gripped me and I come back to you with a story that is quite different to my usual work. I hope that you will give it a chance!
          
          Ashes of Onyx
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389675860-ashes-of-onyx
          
          Onyx City is built on blood, secrets, and neon lights, and B knows its streets better than most. A top-tier mercenary with a reputation for getting the job done, she's spent years surviving in a world that eats the weak alive. But she's done playing by their rules. One last job, and she's out. Out of the life, out of the city, out of Adrianna's grip.
          
          The contract is simple: eliminate Linus Petrovski, the CEO of NovaCorp. But nothing in Onyx City is ever that easy. When B's fixer (and sometimes lover) Adrianna angles for more than just a body count, B finds herself dragged into a game of corporate espionage, experimental tech, and a betrayal she should've seen coming.
          
          When the job goes sideways, and B is left for dead, she wakes up in the city's shadows, barely holding herself together. Now, the only way to survive is to fight back. Hunted by the people she once worked for, carrying tech in her body that could kill her, and running out of time, B has one last chance to take control of her own fate.
          
          But revenge in Onyx City always comes at a cost. And this time, she's ready to burn everything down.