MariamMariam834051

Hi I read ur story and actually it was amazing. I'm a bigenner at writing stories so can y please read my story and advise me how to make it better 

MariamMariam834051

@MariamMariam834051 yea sure thanks BTW I really appreciate that
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Edid12by4

@MariamMariam834051 but with working process you will get it down pack
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MariamMariam834051

@MariamMariam834051 I'm really happy that y liked it and yea I really do hate grammar 
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