Editz

https://www.wattpad.com/story/307540821?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Silentstorm25&wp_originator=CZ6n3Kxdw%2BPxLHMvYgNn4WhAg%2BhLL54K7ZuNKfLAgKbf0WYvyJ%2Bs20wa%2BGwbPCc7NCSA6rXEdXj54AqKoNJAmfB7TPCHoOe1fxtafP1qgpZ6E%2Fru%2F9GmYMbaGv5WATyd

Can you please help me improve my writing style?

Sorry for plugging, Gusto kong ibahagi ang aking second story ko. Thank you and enjoy.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/292757151?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=SweetWriter_24&wp_originator=AksK1CoBOfxheMNO5HemB1ika0kLwC8t36TOxed64DJmkx3lfiZnt2E1Rn%2BT0UfTH8xVtBzRrgDT80hANeSUXwJTSUacLi27eqKe7sRmHprZOmk8m3rYDIEbXBvuZmnK
          
          Sa first story ko naman nasa wall ko lang.