EditsAndCritics

@Lovely_Romances Welcome :D
          	@SeXy_SiLk_MuFfInS Okay since you want it critiqued, I will get someone to do that ASAP. And since you want it edited, I will pm you. xx

angeelcakes

Name/Nick name: angeelcakes 
          
          Title: Queen B's and Bad Boys
          
          Summary: You decide to take down the Queen B of your school who is also your ex-bestfriend. You meet some sex gods, oh dont to forget to throw the infamous ex in there, a over protective brother and a crazy best friend. What could go wrong?
          
           Well, possibly everything!  
          
          17 year old Lana Perez and her bestfriend Sophia Green decide it's time to take down the Queen B (Madison Miller) of their school. Will it actually work or will they just be placed lower on the social latter than they already are? 
          
          To make things worse she's surrounded by "Bad Boys" which not to mention are all sex gods. Three of them are her new neighbors and well the other one just happens to show up. 
          
          Genre: Humor, teen fiction 
          
          Do you want it edited?: No thank you I already have an editor (: 
          
          Do you want it Criticized?  Yes please (: 
          
          Email: angelnunez871999@gmail.com

Author_Q

Name/Nick name; Sexy Muffins 
          
          Title; Last Hope
          
          Summary; (its all I got at the moment) Take a look at Alaric and Elijah as they live their final moments before the world ends...
          
          Genre; boyxboy, short story, science fiction
          
          Do you want it edited?; sure
          
          Do you want it criticized?; yup
          
          Email; lolzcolon@gmail.com

EditsAndCritics

@beeKaVoo - Um, like a follow/dedication? 
          
          @Lovely_Romances - Okay, I'll do that tomorrow.  I mostly work on how well it's written and that kind of stuff, meaning I don't usually work on grammar and spelling mistakes if they have an editor because that's what all books have (mistakes, I meant..) but I'll tell you if you have a part that has lots of spelling mistakes. cx  -MRC

Lovely_Romances

          Critiquing Form –
          
          Name: Lovely_Romances
          
          Critic: @AbnormalMe
          
          Title: When Fate Intervenes
          
          Genre(s): Romance/ Teen Fiction
          
          Summary: Jeremiah and Avalynn have been best friends forever and know that their friendship will keep on growing. Even if it goes beyond what they thought it would be. It will have hardships and won't be perfect. Some moments will be things they can't recover from. The pain might just be unbearable and hard to run away from. They'll get through it though, even if one of them might have to do it alo
          
          Anything Else: I just got an editor, so I'm working on the grammar and spelling mistakes if you see any :)