Edukemma

Please do check out my new book and share to all your friends please I'll be truly grateful

jacobhenderson2121

Edukemma,
          
          I like where you're going with your novel, I take it you're fairly new to writing, yes? I would like to point out that it would be much easier for me and readers like me, to follow along with your thoughts and lines if you had more commas and placed them correctly. Other than the commas, you're doing an excellent job so far, keep it up. Your content is good, so is your description, and character details. 
          
                                                           Sincerely, Jacob H.

Edukemma

@jacobhenderson2121 please do check out my new novel love, life, lies I'm sure you'll love that more
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Edukemma

@jacobhenderson2121 thank you so much for the comment I can't express how happy you've made me just by your comment, I do understand what you mean I've taken correction, please do share the novel with your friends I'll love to have more people reading this book thank you, once again have a very blessed day
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