Eefrah_verse

Hey hi just wanted to recommend you this story and wanted some genuine readers who could give some solid opinion on the writing. 
          
          Eight years after her humiliating break up, after he left her alone at night, after he made his choice, she rose from the ruins. Reborn as the industry's untouchable star, the Screen Erupter, the Box Office Breaker.
          
          Just when she had moved on, fate dragged him back into her life.
          
          Only this time, he didn't return for forgiveness.
          
          He returned with an unhinged obsession and she was still his fixation.
          
          He didn't come back to apologize.
          He came back to claim.
          
          Alas he himself remained unaware that 
          he mistook survival for availability.
          
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/396757585?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Junewithquill

Hello sundari yaa sundar! 
          
          So, main har kisi ke message box main bhatak rahi hun aatma bankar so that i can convince you to read my book, even though it's ongoing but still if you could give it a try while also showering it with your thoughful comments then mujhpar prabhu ki kripaa barase gi, ik rn I am blabbering, but i promised my book doesn't, it makes sense enough to make your heart go crazy over it
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406364962?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jenner-verse

And yea the explanation given by her further never answered my points 
          I never said hinduism make periods taboo but the blind and so called overly religious ppl actually do 
          
          Rhi baat mood swings karn ...nh attend krne k she never mentioned that in her story 
          She always mentioned about not attending any function cause of periods...which actually interpret what i stated earlier
          Baki apki mrji 
          

Ig aapko mujhe report kr hi dena chaiye 
          Just cz apko koi author ya uski book psnd doesn't mean samne vaala bnda glt hai 
          What point stated by me made  you think I was wrong ?
          Baki report krdo mujhe kya 
          I appreciated her work 
          Pointed out what i felt was wrong 
          Just cz somebody is famous doesn't mean she is right 
          Use some logic darling