EgyptianPasha

@WhiteWolf53 thank you! 
          	I just want me and my family and my friends to be happy and healthy and that's my wish :) 

EgyptianPasha

Hey guys! I hate asking stuff from you guys, but will you all take a moment to look at my short story "The Puzzle"
          It's my favorite short story that I've written and I'd love some feedback :)
          
          On another note: I finished chapter 7 of Neverland's Angel! Yay! Sorry it took so long ;)

EgyptianPasha

Hello lovely followers! 
          
          As you may (or may not) have noticed I've been updating my novel "Neverland's Angel" and I need your help. Please if you have not already, give me constructive criticism. I want to be sure this piece reaches its potential. 
          
          And again, if you want me to give you constructive criticism on a piece I'll be happy to do so. Just tell me what piece and I'll get on it asap. 
          
          Thanks guys! 
          ~Pasha