Finally finished chapter ten of Worlds Apart!
Gosh am I happy with myself for getting that done, lol.
I'm having huge trouble finding a picture for John, so if any of you lovely people could find one that sort of fits his character, or how you imagine him to be, that would be much appreciated.
I know Carly seems a little too perfect, but I'm working on that. Reading back, she seems to always be the one acting like an insufferable little goody two shoes who is being persecuted by uncaring friends, and that's not how I want to portray her character at all!
If I can't figure out a way to make her more realistic now, I will make sure to change all that when I finish my story and edit it properly.
Stay lovely!
~Eilis
xox