EjayOtaku

I just wanted you to know your piece isn't where it needs to be for my level of critique.  I am going to go through it and give you some basic advice.

She rushed out the front door, and went on the bus. The bus driver was  a lady that liked to say Hi and shake your hand when you walked in. She avoided that and saw three familar faces: a boy, her senpai, and her rival. A protaganost of an anime must have squinted eyes so she squinted hers

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_1fxiP_TKRuc4hfvxMm_x82vRXtxv_ugNC2P7-1cv_s/edit?usp=sharing (if you guys want to edit this mess)
          
          Guide:
          
          Die ye ode we? Pronounced like: Dee-ay- yay- odeh- weh?
          
          The meaning is: What is your name?
          
          Die wo rue ? Pronounced like: "Dee-ay-woe-roo-eh"?
          
          Meaning: What are you doing?
          
          3. Die wo cha da ? Pronounced like: Dee-ay-war-char-dar ?
          
          Meaning: What do you want to drink?
          
          4.Die wo cha re ? Pronounced like: Dee-ay-war-char-ray
          
          Meaning: What do you want to eat ?
          
          5. Die wo ruru ? Pronounced like: Dee-ay-woe-roo-roo ?
          
          Meaning: What did you do?" (or What have you done?).
          
          Answers:
          
          1 Ode me Ese" Pronounced like: "Odeh-meh-Ese
          
          Meaning: "My name is Ese"
          
          2 "Mi i rimu" Pronounced like "Me-ee-ree-ay-mu"
          
          Meaning: "I am eating".
          
          3. "Me cha da ame" Pronounced like May-cha-dar-amay
          
          Meaning: I want to drink water
          
          4. Me cha re egu Pronounced like "Idk"
          
          Meaning: I want to eat egu (pounded Yams)
          
          5. "Me hwe re" Pronounced like May-whe-ray
          
          Meaning: I laughed
          
          6. Migwuo- I am on my Knees
          
          7. Vrendo- Get up
          
          Urhobo is a wonderful language, even though they really don’t have anything for writing. My dad speaks Urhobo and I decided to practice through my story. Overall, I’m starting to appreciate it even more.
          
          A site if you want to learn more: http://www.urhobo.net/Resources/...