ElTom-fachero

Finalmente después de mucho tiempo 
          	I just published " Capítulo 18: Enfrentamiento Definitivo  " of my story " El NTR-Verso ". https://www.wattpad.com/1573723034?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=ElTom-fachero

YutaOkkotsuthegoat

Wey, ¿cuantos caps tendrá el fic del ntr- verso?

ElTom-fachero

@ YutaOkkotsuthegoat  yo también lo he llegado a pensar pero no creo que a las personas les interese mucho debido a que Hiroki no estará presente, así que no se pero primero voy a terminar NTR-verso y después veré
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YutaOkkotsuthegoat

@ ElTom-fachero  ¿Y por qué no haces otra versión del ntr-verso pero con otros ntrs y con otros eventos diferentes, ya sea en otro verso o que compartan el mismo verso pero que nunca se conozcan?, digo es lo mismo
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ElTom-fachero

@ YutaOkkotsuthegoat  pues horita actualmente solo quedan 18 capítulos, los últimos 10 sería como el arco final y de ahí se acaba la historia, la verdad me gustaría agregar más NTR para que sean felices pero por el bien de la historia es mejor dejarlo así,
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Samuel721281

Responde mi pregunta por favor?

ElTom-fachero

@ Samuel721281  hala madre! Realmente llevo mucho tiempo desaparecido! Perdona si me tardé en responder créeme que la universidad me ha tenido estresado, lo único que puedo decirte es que el siguiente capítulo, si es que finalmente llegue a sacarlo se verá un avance de Hiroki y Ayumu, lo cual sería su redención definitiva, pero como dije todavía no he terminado con la universidad así que esperó poder actualizar pronto y mil disculpas la tardanza
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Keybladelight

Hey man hope you are OK. Have some good news and bad news. 
          
          Good news the game ntr a promise best left unkept Aya edition has been over the creator release the full game and he said he will do a bonus ending for the Aya edition.
          
          Bad news I'm gonna now have to re-watch the endings of the games and the creator lie he give 3 endings, just 3 F bad endings for poor harry no happy ending in the Aya edition so when I finish the 3 bad endings of Aya edition and tell you the detail I want to tell you to make an alternative ending not like the previous timeline with Laura this Aya alternative ending or her real name Misumi Nakatomi alternative ending where she will have the consequences and the idea his that only Misumi/Aya mind go to the different timeline with the current Aya before she was broken again all because of Luca that bastard really like to make ntr to harry kinda like joker and batman feelings so I was thinking well it will be sad but a honorable ending to have harry sucide himself but he still be broken but at least he will keep his honor want harry commit senpukku or was it harakiri and Aya/Misumi see it and her mind get broken and for Luca no longer have the joy to torment harry he feel empty like joker when batman die joker lost his reason to live so I will tell you what ideas I want to make for Harry's to die like a samurai death. 
          
          After I tell you about the 3 endings Aya edition and since current Aya has her dark side to speak with have your OC make Misumi/Aya be in current Aya mind we call her Misumi since it's her real name for not getting confused with Aya, dark Aya and Misumi personalities and have Misumi be full crazy yandere and when she see Harry she take Aya body temporary to feel harry like a crazy girl.
          
          Since you didn't make the characters of APBLU and Aya edition appear maybe for this Halloween special chapter 2 you make them have their own nightmares and have Laura and Misumi/AU Aya be more yandere. Hope you respond to my comments please.

Keybladelight

@ElTom-fachero hey I have question for you before I told you the 3 endings of APBLU Aya edition. Do you prefer to wait for the bonus ending before which the dev said he's gonna release it at November or December or I told you the 3 bad endings now and then I tell you the idea ending so that Aya/Misumi have her consequence like Laura but only her mind get send back in time and subconscious live with the current main timeline Aya with dark Aya since Aya edition is an alternative timeline. So that you OC has pity to Aya because Misumi/Aya (remember Misumi is Aya real name and she hate when people find out her real name and real identity be related to the her father crime boss Yakuza), since Aya will have Misumi in her head and if Aya see Misumi memories in her dream have Aya talking to Misumi in the mirror and hate her for killing Harry (idea Harry end his life to remain his honor like a samurai) and Misumi regret so that make Aya with these new memories more yandere than Misumi since the OG Aya was already a yandere but hiding but this one she gonna show her love to Harry more than Laura and Misumi (her Aya edition self.)
            
            This just some part of the idea but not full details yet hope you respond if you want to know the endings or wait for the bonus ending be released in November or December (the developer creator said it not me).
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Keybladelight

@ElTom-fachero well I just finished one ending two more to go and all 3 are just bad endings the bonus ending he said he's gonna release it either in November or December that why I want to make a special ending for Aya edition but like I said that ending will be sad ending but also honored samurai death ending like I want Harry keep his dignity instead to die has a coward want him to die like a samurai that keep his honor but that just part of the idea when I finished the two endings Aya edition game I tell you the 3 endings Aya edition and have a ending alternative of our own where Misumi/Aya will feel pain emotionally and she then trap in fanfic Aya mind but sometimes she possessed her body temporarily has an idea she goes full Yandere because of new obsession to harry when she saw him die when I told you the endings trust me you nit gonna like it and hate more Luca and also Aya/Misumi for embrace her corruption like Laura in the main game timeline they ruin Aya image has best girl in Aya edition I prefer the OG game APBLU Aya at least she keeps her title has best girl and harry choose her or choose both Laura and Aya with Aya help in the main game.
            
            Knowing the dev creator I have a feeling he's gonna do a prequel of the game since we have Harry's childhood friend and I wonder what kind of interaction harry did to Luca to have him trigger to hatred him forever and ntr everything harry the people to ruin him since the childhood friend of harry show up in Aya edition and then left because of harry he use her just has a pawn so I hope in Halloween you make Luca have the horrific most torture death and if he ask to die don't make him escape death he will he tortured in Halloween so that his mind no longer think of harry and he is a broken man mindless and he is like a vegetable.
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ElTom-fachero

@ Keybladelight  Hi, sorry if it took me a while to respond, well now I see, I hope they release an alternative ending, and at the moment I'm working on the confrontation between Hiroki and his friends against Kokujin, but I'm going to keep that in mind for that special.
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YutaOkkotsuthegoat

Hola autor, ¿¿le puedo hacer una pregunta si no es mucha molestia mi estimado??

YutaOkkotsuthegoat

@ ElTom-fachero  Ok, entiendo, por lo menos has que Hiroki se detone a Saki
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ElTom-fachero

@ YutaOkkotsuthegoat  mi compa no creo que agregue más por una simple razón, voy a alargar bastante la historia y algunos personajes se quedarán sin protagonismo pero quizás para otra historia
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YutaOkkotsuthegoat

@ ElTom-fachero  vas a añadir más ntr al ntrverso como el de tomboy sissy bullying o el de korean girl in américan??
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