Hey, thank so much for the feedback on BOTH my stories! Chasing Chaos never gets anyyy love (except you :D). Unfortunately I'm putting it on hold at least for a little while because I did a typical writer thing and started writing about really personal things in my real life, and what do you know, I'm too emotionally attached to my main character to write well... haha.
As far as Gatebound goes, thank you soooo much for the constructive criticism! Did you really think it could use more description? I always feel guilty like I'm swamping people in imagery.