EleanorInNeverland

N'aww me too! I have a double period on wednesdays kill me now YEASHHH IM COOL WITH THAT SUPERBATMAN IS AWESOMEEE :) <3 Thank-you for the dedication <3

EleanorInNeverland

@GloriaNanaabaEsuonBe YAAAAYYYY I HAVE A NEW FRIEND!!!!! :) :) :) :) HAPPY TIMESSS :D 
          
          Your welcome, ill defiantly be looking out for that! :) 
          
          Why is wednesdays putting a funk on your mood? Thats not very nice of them... would you like me to go and beat them up for you ? cause I will:) ;p <3 
          
          Dont get me wrong I have alot of respect for superman and all but DUDE BATMAN FTW!!!! <3

EleanorInNeverland

@GloriaNanaabaEsuonBe Thank-you :) Your very welcome hunn anytime :D If I think of any ideas I let you know and ill message you so that you might update faster if you ever need it ? :) Aww that would be very nice thank-you hunn I would love to have one of the chapters dedicated to me <3 Keep talking to me whenever yeah? You seem like a really nice person and I wouldn't mind getting to know you better :) <3

EleanorInNeverland

@GloriaNanaabaEsuonBe Right lady here it is...
          
          I really, really like the fan fiction and the story line is really good and exciting. I really enjoy reading it I also find it very inspiring for my own writing and I like the style that you have written it in. 
          
          The one thing that I would say about it is I think that you could add some more detail to the chapters and make them slightly smoother to read. And maybe slow the story down a bit because it goes quite quickly and sometimes makes it a little difficult to understand But apart from that they are really good :) 
          
          and the only other thing I can think to say is.....
          
          UPDATE MORE!!!!!! 
          
          Really hope this helps you improve your writing and is the kind of feedback that you wanted hunn :D 
          I'll let you know if I think of anything else :) 
          
          also would It be okay if I dedicated the next chapter of my fan fiction to you? seeing as you have inspired me quite alot ? :) 
          
          <3