Elenchabaud_

Hi,I'm new here,I'm writing a story,I'm Italian so I'm traslating it in english with google translat,I promes that I'm gonna make it better,if you want you can read it and tell me what do u think about it,I didn't finish it,but I just wanna know what you think about it,sorry fot the bad english.
          This is the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/1467798716-the-magic-that-separates-us