Minsan pag bored ka tlga, kahit ano pwede mo gawin. Gumawa man ng story para lang mag vent ahaha. 
Anyways, If you see something i can improve or change like if the pacing of the story is too fast or the way i phrase things that it gets too confusing, all of that. Please feel free to give feedback, this is my first time writing a story so all criticism is much appreciated; even if its just my grammar :))