I have updated my despriction of my story, what do you think about it? Does it make you want to read it?
"This is the story about a viking woman named Ylva Ragnvaldsdottir. Born and raised in Avaldsnes, a small town in Norway. She and her family moved to the beautiful country of The Faroe Islands. And this is where she finds out the world is not as it seems. Ylva fights her weakness brought to her by mean-spirited people. A love interest helps her on her way to happiness. But then the curse changes everything she ever believed in, making her something completely new to the world. We will follow her journey through life.
A story of beautiful scenery, a love story, and the struggles against evil."