ElijahThurston

Sooo, I might have to make some MAJOR edits to chapter 3 in order to properly lead up to some important inciting events. Hopefully I'll be on track to release chapter 4 by Sunday. 
          	
          	I'm doing my best to keep the book exciting, just keep in mind this is a slow-burn kind of story. Gotta keep the first half somewhat laid-back in order to make the insanity that is the second half, well... INSANE.

ElijahThurston

Sooo, I might have to make some MAJOR edits to chapter 3 in order to properly lead up to some important inciting events. Hopefully I'll be on track to release chapter 4 by Sunday. 
          
          I'm doing my best to keep the book exciting, just keep in mind this is a slow-burn kind of story. Gotta keep the first half somewhat laid-back in order to make the insanity that is the second half, well... INSANE.

ElijahThurston

I had some time off today and put it to great use: Chapter 3 of Dante Morder is finished! I've put a decent amount of time into it and I hope you enjoy the new direction it will take the story, as well as some subtle changes in tone.
          
          As always, it is not a final draft. Let me know what you think, and please inform me of any mistakes you may come across! It should be a pretty clean draft, but fresh eyes notice things I can't.

Paranormal_Princess

Hi hi, I'd appreciate your feedback on my latest horror novel https://my.w.tt/jdKJ0XpoK1

Paranormal_Princess

@ElijahThurston Thank you, and thank you for the follow.
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ElijahThurston

@Bronilaw Let me add it to my library!
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