Hi :) I don't want to sound rude but I just wanted to say that while I loved Skipping time I prefer the old title to the new one. I believe it is a rather cliche title for a very unique and original story. But I still trust your judgement and if you get more reads this way I can't really complain. You deserve all the credit and attention you can get :)
Anyway, you have a beautiful way of writing and I can sometimes find myself thinking back on the lyrics Jess wrote and marvel at their depth. You also get my respect for not rushing their relationship.
Lastly I just wanted to say that I love your characters! :D They are very relatable and you manage to convey their quite complex emotions very clearly.