Elisedeluxe

Evening, I need your help. 
          	
          	As I'm trying to make a living out of my writing, I've written some books for proper publishing. I would love it if you could read through them and basically tell me what needs improving and what doesn't make sense? 
          	
          	I have three books, you can take on as many or few as you want. 
          	
          	The first is a crime novella (Approx 22,500 words) called One Thousand Secrets. 
          	The second is a dystopian romance novella (Approx 38,000 words) called The Arc. 
          	The last is zombie apocolypse novel (Approx 42,900 words) called Dead By The Mountain. 
          	
          	It would be a big help if you could help out.

Selene_Nova

While I wished to help you, I too, wish to write some proper book for a living too.
          	  
          	  Currently at the plotting area, I also wanting to make game for a living too.
          	  
          	  But I'll help you the best I can.
          	  
          	  [Ps: I keep on messing up my stories for unknown reason-
          	           Help- T*T]
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LunaEclipsWolf

Hey  so I loved your story Till Death Do Us Part and I was wondering if you would mind me using it as inspiration for my own fic? Obviously I’ll credit you and change some of the major and minor plot points but I wanted to ask permission. I might not ever finish or publish it but I wanted to ask permission regardless

LunaEclipsWolf

Thank you so much! And I will, it may take a year or more though lol. I don’t like publishing fics until I’ve completed them so it takes me ages
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Elisedeluxe

@LunaEclipsWolf of course. I'm always happy for people to be inspired and write their own fics. Drop a message when you publish it :)
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Shadow-Lynx37

Not to be rude or anything but is the experimented Nagisa assassination Classroom series done because you kind of left it at a cliffhanger

Shadow-Lynx37

@Elisedeluxe okay thank you so much Author-san
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Elisedeluxe

@Shadow-Lynx37 You're not being rude. I often leave my stories open for interpretation and incase I want to return to it later. As of this day, I have no intentions of returning to the story but I shall let you know if this changes
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Elisedeluxe

Evening, I need your help. 
          
          As I'm trying to make a living out of my writing, I've written some books for proper publishing. I would love it if you could read through them and basically tell me what needs improving and what doesn't make sense? 
          
          I have three books, you can take on as many or few as you want. 
          
          The first is a crime novella (Approx 22,500 words) called One Thousand Secrets. 
          The second is a dystopian romance novella (Approx 38,000 words) called The Arc. 
          The last is zombie apocolypse novel (Approx 42,900 words) called Dead By The Mountain. 
          
          It would be a big help if you could help out.

Selene_Nova

While I wished to help you, I too, wish to write some proper book for a living too.
            
            Currently at the plotting area, I also wanting to make game for a living too.
            
            But I'll help you the best I can.
            
            [Ps: I keep on messing up my stories for unknown reason-
                     Help- T*T]
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Selene_Nova

Hello there, Elisedeluxe-san, I, after reading two Harry Potter's fanfiction, have wondered if you ever planned to make a sequel for them.
          
          For <Till Death do us Past> and <Trip Through Time>
          
          Both are wonderful to read that I had re-read them a few time.
          
          This is just a curiousity, I know how much pain it is to write a story, I, like you, am a writer aftee all.

Selene_Nova

Ah, thank you for informing, guess I will only be waiting for <Till Death do us Part>'s sequel then.
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Elisedeluxe

@Selene_Nova hello there. I'm glad you like my work. 
            
            Trip Through Time shall not be recieving a sequel as I think its a more fitting end to leave it as it is.
            
            As for Till Death do us Part, it has got a sequel due to be published on the 25/7/2022.
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middleschoolwasweird

I like your covers for your books and I was wondering do you make them or something?

middleschoolwasweird

Okay, Thank you!
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Elisedeluxe

@Myfanficcenter Thanks. 
            
            That depends on the book. I edit a few so the art isn't mine but I tailor it to my use. Manifest Monster is the exception as I drew that.
            
            Most the covers come from my friend da_pizzaman7. He is really talented and I don't think half the covers would exist without him.
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_LilFroggy_

Hi!!! I really liked till death do us part. Is there going to be a second book, by any chance.

_LilFroggy_

Thank you for responding. Take all the time you need to get it published and I will definitely go check out the other one
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Elisedeluxe

@FellowBiBuddy I've been working on the sequel, currently dubbed Death Parts Us though it's only in its early stages and could take a while to be published.
            
            If you are interested, in the mean time, you could read "Erased and Replaced" which is my other Harry Potter fanfic
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