Elisedeluxe

Evening, I need your help. 
          	
          	As I'm trying to make a living out of my writing, I've written some books for proper publishing. I would love it if you could read through them and basically tell me what needs improving and what doesn't make sense? 
          	
          	I have three books, you can take on as many or few as you want. 
          	
          	The first is a crime novella (Approx 22,500 words) called One Thousand Secrets. 
          	The second is a dystopian romance novella (Approx 38,000 words) called The Arc. 
          	The last is zombie apocolypse novel (Approx 42,900 words) called Dead By The Mountain. 
          	
          	It would be a big help if you could help out.

Selene_Nova

While I wished to help you, I too, wish to write some proper book for a living too.
          	  
          	  Currently at the plotting area, I also wanting to make game for a living too.
          	  
          	  But I'll help you the best I can.
          	  
          	  [Ps: I keep on messing up my stories for unknown reason-
          	           Help- T*T]
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Rotisserie_chicken64

Then who's hiccup mateing with in hiccups secret

Elisedeluxe

@Rotisserie_chicken64 Hiccup is shipped with an OC in Hiccup's Secret. You meet him through the story. Though I do wish to say, I have no actual descriptions of any acts as I do not write that sort of stuff.
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Shadow-Lynx37

Not to be rude or anything but is the experimented Nagisa assassination Classroom series done because you kind of left it at a cliffhanger

Shadow-Lynx37

@Elisedeluxe okay thank you so much Author-san
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Elisedeluxe

@Shadow-Lynx37 You're not being rude. I often leave my stories open for interpretation and incase I want to return to it later. As of this day, I have no intentions of returning to the story but I shall let you know if this changes
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Elisedeluxe

Evening, I need your help. 
          
          As I'm trying to make a living out of my writing, I've written some books for proper publishing. I would love it if you could read through them and basically tell me what needs improving and what doesn't make sense? 
          
          I have three books, you can take on as many or few as you want. 
          
          The first is a crime novella (Approx 22,500 words) called One Thousand Secrets. 
          The second is a dystopian romance novella (Approx 38,000 words) called The Arc. 
          The last is zombie apocolypse novel (Approx 42,900 words) called Dead By The Mountain. 
          
          It would be a big help if you could help out.

Selene_Nova

While I wished to help you, I too, wish to write some proper book for a living too.
            
            Currently at the plotting area, I also wanting to make game for a living too.
            
            But I'll help you the best I can.
            
            [Ps: I keep on messing up my stories for unknown reason-
                     Help- T*T]
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Selene_Nova

Hello there, Elisedeluxe-san, I, after reading two Harry Potter's fanfiction, have wondered if you ever planned to make a sequel for them.
          
          For <Till Death do us Past> and <Trip Through Time>
          
          Both are wonderful to read that I had re-read them a few time.
          
          This is just a curiousity, I know how much pain it is to write a story, I, like you, am a writer aftee all.

Selene_Nova

Ah, thank you for informing, guess I will only be waiting for <Till Death do us Part>'s sequel then.
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Elisedeluxe

@Selene_Nova hello there. I'm glad you like my work. 
            
            Trip Through Time shall not be recieving a sequel as I think its a more fitting end to leave it as it is.
            
            As for Till Death do us Part, it has got a sequel due to be published on the 25/7/2022.
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middleschoolwasweird

I like your covers for your books and I was wondering do you make them or something?

middleschoolwasweird

Okay, Thank you!
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Elisedeluxe

@Myfanficcenter Thanks. 
            
            That depends on the book. I edit a few so the art isn't mine but I tailor it to my use. Manifest Monster is the exception as I drew that.
            
            Most the covers come from my friend da_pizzaman7. He is really talented and I don't think half the covers would exist without him.
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_LilFroggy_

Hi!!! I really liked till death do us part. Is there going to be a second book, by any chance.

_LilFroggy_

Thank you for responding. Take all the time you need to get it published and I will definitely go check out the other one
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Elisedeluxe

@FellowBiBuddy I've been working on the sequel, currently dubbed Death Parts Us though it's only in its early stages and could take a while to be published.
            
            If you are interested, in the mean time, you could read "Erased and Replaced" which is my other Harry Potter fanfic
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Elisedeluxe

Hello there, if you are interested, I have published a new story called Context which uses the OC found in my stories. 
          
          So if you want to read more of the little badgers from Till Death do us Part or want to see the hatchlings from Hiccup's Secret why dont you go check it out! 
          
          You don't have to read all the stories and it makes sense without them but if you are interested, these are the stories included:
          
          Stuck Between Realities, Jigsaw, Behind a Smile, Sound Check, Pain of the Past, Do We Scare You, The Broken Hero Jashi, The Quirky art of Performance, Dysphoria, Manifest Monsters, Hiccup's Secret, Trip Through Time, Till Death do us Part, Mini Magic and The Assassin Within- all of which can be found on my account- as well as Contradiction which can be found on Anime_Wish's account.