@cchowmei I'm sorry for not doing this earlier but I took a break from wattpad, I read your prologue and I loved it, I saw you are rewriting it so I just happend to notice you had a spelling mistake "disappeared" in the 3rd paragraph from the end
Also I like your description, and the fact that it's from Chase's point of view, there are not many books written from a guy's perspective. I like your original idea and the fact that Chase's point of view allows the mistery around Lou to persist.