ElizaVivianRose

Wolf anyone be willing to mention me? I'm trying to get my poetry a little more recognized so I can get some opinions on it and try to improve. I will gladly return the favor!

ElizaVivianRose

Ah!!! I'm so excited!!! I just entered my "Suicide Poems" in the wattys!! It might not seem like that big of a deal to anyone else but my word is hardly ever noticed so this could really show others my mediocre work. Gosh I'm so excited!!

SADnaomi

Hello Eliza. Could you check out my poetry "shattered" if I'm not bothering you. Please, give me feedback. I want to know what I'm doing wrong. Thank you. It's fine if you don't want to..

ElizaVivianRose

Okay, In my opinion your poems are more along the lines of short stories. Poetry usually rhymes but not all the time. Anyway, any poem should be able to sound somewhat like song lyrics. That's just how I've always thought of it
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TearsAsInk

Hello partner. I hope you’ll like my poems

TearsAsInk

It’s okay and Thank you :)
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ElizaVivianRose

I apologize, I've been very distracted and haven't had time to look through your poetry. I think it's past past time for that round of partners but i will gladly look through your poetry 
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