ElizabethGeorge13

I am having a hard time writing this Hobi story, so it may be a while before it is updated. I don't generally do romance, and I figured this is a great way to challenge myself, and well, it's working it is a challenge. I also got hit with plot bunnies for another story so Im working on that at the moment.

ElizabethGeorge13

@fantasyadhya So I had a chance to read a few chapters. 
          I would add in more details. I always like to uses the senses to kind of help build my characters world so what color are the walls? what is int eh room with here? what does it smell like all of this can help the reader get more emerced in the world you are creating. 
          
          maybe find a friend or someone who would be willing to go through an edit or typos and that kind of stuff. I would also add in a translation.

ElizabethGeorge13

I am having a hard time writing this Hobi story, so it may be a while before it is updated. I don't generally do romance, and I figured this is a great way to challenge myself, and well, it's working it is a challenge. I also got hit with plot bunnies for another story so Im working on that at the moment.