ElizabethGeorge13

I am having a hard time writing this Hobi story, so it may be a while before it is updated. I don't generally do romance, and I figured this is a great way to challenge myself, and well, it's working it is a challenge. I also got hit with plot bunnies for another story so Im working on that at the moment.

fantasyadhya_tk

Hey you have followed me I am very thankful for that but please try to you know read my book please read my book if it's up to your interest up to your liking please continue reading and engaging and commenting in voting if it's not the I don't know what to say just you know don't keep me on a hope that if you have followed when you read my book I am very much happy new people following me but if you want engaging in my book is no reason for me to keep writing so it's not a head or any anything it's my plea please please engagement I know it's not be long since I am writing but because of following and not even engaging its very hurtful

ElizabethGeorge13

You shouldn’t expect every single person who follows you will engage with you. I have many followers who never engage with me or my stories. 
            
            I also don’t like the way Wattpad is laid out it’s hard for me to read.
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fantasyadhya_tk

Hi diid you read my chapters

fantasyadhya_tk

@ElizabethGeorge13 thnks
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ElizabethGeorge13

@fantasyadhya So I had a chance to read a few chapters. 
            I would add in more details. I always like to uses the senses to kind of help build my characters world so what color are the walls? what is int eh room with here? what does it smell like all of this can help the reader get more emerced in the world you are creating. 
            
            maybe find a friend or someone who would be willing to go through an edit or typos and that kind of stuff. I would also add in a translation.
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fantasyadhya_tk

@fantasyadhya thnka
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ElizabethGeorge13

I am having a hard time writing this Hobi story, so it may be a while before it is updated. I don't generally do romance, and I figured this is a great way to challenge myself, and well, it's working it is a challenge. I also got hit with plot bunnies for another story so Im working on that at the moment.