ElleByron

@koalasandowls thanks. Now I'm going to look it up.I want to learn more about her

ElleByron

Listen, you might have seen my comments as harsh but they were honest. As an aspiring author, the idea is to not put out the half-hearted attempt you did on your last chapter. I understand the family problem issue, I just lost my mother after a four year battle with cancer. I was her primary caretaker, a mother of 2 (8 & 10), going to school, a fulltime job and planning a wedding; only to lose my mom half way thru. But the honest thing is I halted my first novel to take care of my family.Like you I am not sharing this to garner sympathy, but the truth is we are constantly waiting on you. You are not very timely even prior to this issue. I am truly and wholeheartedly sorry for the things you are going through these things can never be easy. Just know I was not harsh on you. When an artist put their work on display, much as you have, they are opening the door for critique. You are very talented and whether you display your work for my pleasure or not it is still on display. Take much pride in what you present because you never know where it will lead. Editing for gramar is not a horrible thing. If you are unable to take the critique then you may want to consider utilizing a journal and not a public forum. I said earlier that you are very talented but I was wrong. You have to potential to be more than a talent. I love your plot and you have the potential for this book to be so much more than a posting on wattpad, as great as this forum may be. The pride you take in your work is the starting point for others to take in it. I wasn't judging you. I was stating what has been going on. If you don't like it then change what is going on so that what is reported is different. I held my mother's hand as she took her last breath and lemme tell you, death in real life is not nearly as beautiful as it is on TV. Life is hard and we deal with it. Please let that last chapter be the worse chapter you submit. You are so much better than that. 

soccerchick21

So you know what? You have no right at all to judge me because I haven't been updating as quickly as you would like and apparently I'm not writing up to your standards but that's not my goal. I don't write my story to impress people like you. I know I haven't been writing and there is a reason. I'm having a really tough year. I have family problems and all kinds of things going on. I'm not trying to get you to feel sympathy or pity me, but I would appreciate if you didn't leave comments on my story like you did. You have no idea what I'm going through or the reason that I haven't been writing. I'm so sorry that my "half hearted work" wasn't up to your standards. I am not as flaky as you make me out to be and I am fully committed to finishing this story.. in my own time. It might take me awhile and that's okay, because its my story. I love fans of my book, but I'm not writing only to gain popularity. I'm writing for myself. If you aren't happy with my book, don't read. There's no reason whatsoever for you to leave comments like you did.