ElleDavies

"Chapter 11
          	
          	We were in a limo, on our way to the concert.
          	
          	"I still can't believe we are in a LIMO!" 
          	
          	Kaley exclaimed.  
          	
          	"this makes the whole experience ten times better!"
          	
          	Brooke just smirked at her condescendingly.
          	
          	Kaley caught Brooke's expression and her face fell.
          	
          	"yeah it's pretty exciting!" 
          	
          	I said enthusiastically, trying to lighten the mood.
          	
          	We spent the rest of the limo ride in silence with Brooke and Kaley sending each other occasional glares.
          	
          	When we finally arrived, the place was packed. We saw girls of all ages, and even some boys, and almost everyone had Justin Bieber's name or face on some part of their body.
          	
          	One girl had about 30 glowsticks stuck to every surface of her body and a t-shirt that said "JB" underneath.
          	
          	Everyone looked super excited.
          	
          	I had never actually seen Justin Bieber in concert before.
          	
          	We made our way through the huge crowd and after signing many autographs, we found our seats.  
          	
          	Front row.
          	
          	There was a big screen on the wall counting down the minutes before the concert.  
          	
          	There was just five minutes left.
          	
          	"Ahh I'm so excited Tina! I've never been to a concert before!" 
          	
          	Kaley exclaimed.
          	
          	"I haven't either actually..." 
          	
          	I replied.
          	
          	We sat there chatting about how excited we were then before we knew it, there was 30 seconds left.
          	
          	The whole place was counting down
          	
          	"TEN, NINE, EIGHT, SEVEN,"
          	
          	Kaley looked so excited I was afraid she would barf on me or something
          	
          	"SIX, FIVE, FOUR, THREE, TWO...
          	
          	ONEEEEE!"
          	
          	The whole place started screaming at the top of their lungs.
          	
          	Everyone thought Justin would come out right away, but instead a big screen turned on, showing a kind of ad for x-box.
          	
          	When Justin showed up on the screen, everyone started screaming again.
          	
          	Then finally it was over and everyone waited anxiously for Justin to come out.
          	
          	Then suddenly the stage filled with fog, and a big round metal cage started coming out of the floor.
          	
          	Kaley started..." http://wattpad.com/story/109331

ElleDavies

"Chapter 11
          
          We were in a limo, on our way to the concert.
          
          "I still can't believe we are in a LIMO!" 
          
          Kaley exclaimed.  
          
          "this makes the whole experience ten times better!"
          
          Brooke just smirked at her condescendingly.
          
          Kaley caught Brooke's expression and her face fell.
          
          "yeah it's pretty exciting!" 
          
          I said enthusiastically, trying to lighten the mood.
          
          We spent the rest of the limo ride in silence with Brooke and Kaley sending each other occasional glares.
          
          When we finally arrived, the place was packed. We saw girls of all ages, and even some boys, and almost everyone had Justin Bieber's name or face on some part of their body.
          
          One girl had about 30 glowsticks stuck to every surface of her body and a t-shirt that said "JB" underneath.
          
          Everyone looked super excited.
          
          I had never actually seen Justin Bieber in concert before.
          
          We made our way through the huge crowd and after signing many autographs, we found our seats.  
          
          Front row.
          
          There was a big screen on the wall counting down the minutes before the concert.  
          
          There was just five minutes left.
          
          "Ahh I'm so excited Tina! I've never been to a concert before!" 
          
          Kaley exclaimed.
          
          "I haven't either actually..." 
          
          I replied.
          
          We sat there chatting about how excited we were then before we knew it, there was 30 seconds left.
          
          The whole place was counting down
          
          "TEN, NINE, EIGHT, SEVEN,"
          
          Kaley looked so excited I was afraid she would barf on me or something
          
          "SIX, FIVE, FOUR, THREE, TWO...
          
          ONEEEEE!"
          
          The whole place started screaming at the top of their lungs.
          
          Everyone thought Justin would come out right away, but instead a big screen turned on, showing a kind of ad for x-box.
          
          When Justin showed up on the screen, everyone started screaming again.
          
          Then finally it was over and everyone waited anxiously for Justin to come out.
          
          Then suddenly the stage filled with fog, and a big round metal cage started coming out of the floor.
          
          Kaley started..." http://wattpad.com/story/109331