Elle

Thanks for the follow! :) It's always nice to make a new Wattpad friend :P

That's great. I've been doing ballet classes for 11 years, but I'm doing a contemporary based gcse at school so i'm really into them both aswell. :)

Hello there. :) Thanks for the follow and I love the background. Don't be afraid to check out my book, it would mean a lot to me. Thanks anyway.

@ThisIsUs09 Yepp, UK all my life :D

@ElleJB An England person too?! *high five*!

@LTrant98 Okay, will you look at mine too? thanks :D
          

@LTrant98 ur welcome :D
          

@ElleJB  yes the rest of the story will explain it and chapter six will come soon i am going to type it up in a few minutes from my notepad :D

@starz00 Also, when are you publishing chapter six? I'm looking forward to reading more :))

@starz00 I enjoyed it a lot, and out of all the stories i've read so far on wattpad, I would say yours has the best characters. The way you portray Athenia is really good and realistic as she isnt too perfect, but a reckless teen. I like that she likes to break the boundaries of her time. The historical context also seems to be done well (I don't know that much about the victorian era but it all seems correct to me) I like how the character of the tutor is portrayed through Athenia's eyes as unfair and mean, but when she speaks to her father, you can sympathise with her, and see that Athenia doesn't really hate her. I'm not as enthralled with the character of Charles, but well have to see when you post more. 
          The only thing I would say is that the prologue is very confusing, but I guess the rest of the story will explain it?