(I’m just assuming you mean both of your stories? Hahaha)
I liked them very much, especially the one with the gum xD. For the squid game one, I kind of over read that it was about squid game and since I didn’t watch it yet I was SO CONFUSED AHHH I’M SO DUMB.
Aside from that, the only thing you could improve is upper and lower case in your stories that occur from time to time (but only very little, so I don’t mind them that much). And there are some typos (like "Elji", you know it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ), but they happen, it’s fine
You probably shouldn’t take advice from me though, I’m not a native speaker. Please forgive me if I made some mistakes in this response (⌒_⌒;)