whitewolf667

Can u make a sequel plzzzzz

CindyRosemary

@whitewolf667 it was amazing so thank you 
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ElsaS7

Hey there! First of all, thank you for reading my book, I appreciate it a lot! Second of all, I am sorry to inform you that there will not be any sequel as there is nothing more to write or add. Again, thanks for reading! 
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Ambrosia_Lee

A Time Traveling Fairytale.
          I cried too many times
          I guess not all fairytales end with a happily ever after

ElsaS7

Thank you for reading my story, I appreciate it a lot! I hope you enjoyed the story despite the not-so-happy ending. My original plan was to have a happy ending, but things changed, and so the alternative ending is just in my drafts. If there is any comfort, I can tell you that in the alternative ending they end up together. 
            Again, thank you for reading my work!
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snow_winter_love

Hi...and i want to comment on your story..
          
          when i'm reading your story, it makes me smile because of excitement and the impact of the story. I really love how the adventure takes place and when i read the part where in the muskeeters are on the story... I am like "WHAT?!!" and it has a lot of fun.. i was hoping it would end out to be a happy ending but i really cried when i finished it. I am heartbroken when it happened. But its a really great story.
           I really love it and i hope you continue it and make an ending of a "happily ever after"..
          Thank u for ur story

snow_winter_love

@ElsaS7 
            OMG....i like it...thank you
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ElsaS7

A face I had seen too often in my dreams, and a face I could never get tired of, no matter how many annoying smirks or cheeky smiles that would form on it.
            
            Without a second thought, I threw away every bag I carried. Slung it to the ground like it was a piece of trash.
            
            With my legs dancing in a run, I sprinted towards him like a gazelle after its freedom. Flying like a dove to catch peace, and to leave the misery behind.
            
            I reached him quicker than the wind could fly, almost like I had transported myself to his side. And before he could say anything, my hands wrapped themselves around him in a warm hug. 
            
            Not letting the time pass by or go to waste, I did what I had longed for since the first drop of the heavy second had hit my broken heart.
            
            I kissed him.
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ElsaS7

I had arrived on the other side, my belongings laying on the green grass in a medieval-looking design. 
            
            No need to worry about that now.
            
            Knowing that it would take some time to get everything up the hill, I slung all the backpacks I could carry over my head and shoulders, strapping them mercilessly to my body.
            
            With a long look up the hill, I breathed out a tired sigh before I had even started. I let the seconds pass, not wanting to move or begin on my last journey up the hill. But in the end, I pushed myself to go up. 
            
            Heavy. That's what it all felt.
            
            And I'm not saying that just because I'm carrying eight backpacks like a bodybuilder. No. Some meanings have two sides — just like people do.
            
            I carried it all to the top, slinging one backpack after the other off my frame. Damn, it was harder than I thought.
            
            "Elena?"
            
            The warm voice had me snapping my head to the source of the sun.
            
            My eyes landed on those chocolate orbs I had learned to love. The orbs I could stare at all day and all night without a blink of an eye.
            
            It was like the time stood still. 
            
            Ironic, isn't it?
            
            "Ethan," I breathed out, feeling my eyes glistering with cold water and warm happiness.
            
            He stood there, tall and vulnerable, yet, the bright smile held its place on his face.
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KV_Aisling

Hi ElsaS7!!! I am from the Philippines and the time that I saw your novel... I felt happy to read it because its adventure and full of fantasy.... I love it... And i am currently added it in my library... I wish you will read my novels..  Too.  I am so sorry to tell that the words were written in my language,Filipino.  But you can use google translator
          ..to read it right??? So please... Read and help me... Thank u in advance... Love ya..