Elusahsia

Hey,
          	
          	Accepting books for feedback for a limited time. Not a reader--- If you know me, you know that, but if you want feedback, send your books over. Can't promise to get through them all, nor do I promise to do any votes or likes or what have you. Just anyone genuinely wanting feedback, you are free to submit!
          	
          	**Note: No promises. This is not some kind of a deal. That said, I can't wait to assist in your journey, however I can! :)
          	
          	Elusahsia 

lislis33

@Elusahsia i really like reading and then suddenly an idea for a story came to my mind! i started talking with friends abt it and then an entire storyline formed :)
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lislis33

@Elusahsia hii would you please read the first chapters of the book im writing (i havent written much, but would like someones opinion on it so far) id be really gratefulll :))
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French-1

@Elusahsia Can you please red both of my books ones and short story the other a ongoing series of chapters!
          	  Au Revoir! 
          	  ;)
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lilyjacksson441

Hi Author,
          
          
          I just finished reading your story and I truly enjoyed it. You’ve done such a wonderful job bringing each character to life it really drew me in.
          
          
          I’m a commission-based artist with over 11 years of experience, and I’d love the chance to collaborate if you’re ever interested. Working with talented writers like you has always been a rewarding experience for me, and I’d be excited to create something together.
          
          Here are a few ways you can reach me:
          
          
          Instagram: lily.jackson321
          
          Discord: lilyjackson0295
          
          Email: lilyjackson2794@gmail.com
          
          
          If you prefer a different way to connect, just let me know I’ll be happy to reach out wherever you’re most comfortable.
          Thank you so much for your time, and for sharing your amazing story!
          
          Warm regards,
          Lily

Elusahsia

@lilyjacksson441 cool! But in your introduction, you said you were a commission based artist who would love to collaborate 
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lilyjacksson441

@Elusahsia  No, I’m not inviting you to offer any service. I just want to talk to a good writer like you, that’s why I’m asking to talk on social media.
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lilyjacksson441

@Elusahsia  We will discuss about your story.
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lily_simonds

Heyy!! 
          I'm Lily and I'd love for you to read my story ♥️ 
          Also, we could have a follow for follow :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390656385?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=lily_simonds

Elusahsia

@lily_simonds Hy lily!! I am not a big reader but I refer you to my about section for that purpose. Hope it helps! :)
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tanpus__

I’m writing a story about two broken souls who find the meaning of life in each other. It’s a psychological drama, layered with coming-of-age themes and the quiet ache of forbidden love.
          I’ll be happy to give feedback and vote back on your story. Thanks…
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393698858?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=tanpus99__

bookywormy2

Greetings! How are you? I wanted to ask if you were interested in religion/history related books. If so, i can advice you the book i shared on the link. Its about the life of Prophet Muhammad. The last Prophet of God who brought us the last holy book 'Quran', a book gifted by our God to us as a divine guide, with the promise from Allah that it will never be altered, not even a single word of it. I will be very happy if you give it a chance and have a look at it. Or if you like i also have a book about life of  Prophet Jesus aswell, if you prefer Christian books. 
          
          If you do not like religion related books, i also have a fun-filled, teen book blending humor and fantasy. And it is already completed so you will not have to wait for new chapters to come up. If you read it, hope you like it. You can find that one in my profile page. Have a nice day!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385740939?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=bookywormy2

Elusahsia

@bookywormy2 
            
            Greetings!
            
            I am good, and you?
            
            I am not a big reader but I do find these discussions, although hard, they are interesting and thought provoking.
            
            Thank you for the invite!
            
            Have a nice day!
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thisusernamistakenis

inavihsk

Dear Author,
          
          I recently read your book and found the plot engaging. However, I felt that the character descriptions and situational details could be more precise and vivid. Adding depth would enhance the reading experience.
          
          I'd love to access the full book. Could you please let me know where I can find it?

Elusahsia

@inavihsk 
            
            Dear Reader, 
            
            Thank you for reaching out and the kind words! :)
            
            For access, please send your email. If you are uncomfortable, simply delete it afterwards, or reach out via the link in the 'About' section of this account.
            
            As for the descriptions and details, did you only read the excerpts? I suggest you read some chapters, enough to get immersed in the story. If you still feel this way after the chapters, kindly let me know, as this helps me improve as a writer. 
            
            Besides, I would love your feedback!
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