Elvynnx

I HATE it when a character are described to be cold selfish apathetic and couldn't careless about anyone else, the second someone in danger, you know who saved them first? THAT SUPPOSED SELFISH APATHETIC CHARACTER. And it's not at their middle of their development it's at the start of the story. If they are the cold apathetic character the author want it to be, THAN LET THEM BE APATHETIC. I swear, some authors just wrote cold apathetic and couldn't careless about anyone else just to make their writing look cool. I'm not saying some writers can't write apathetic character, but please, if a character is selfish apathetic, then they are not going to step in because, again they're selfish.

Elvynnx

I HATE it when a character are described to be cold selfish apathetic and couldn't careless about anyone else, the second someone in danger, you know who saved them first? THAT SUPPOSED SELFISH APATHETIC CHARACTER. And it's not at their middle of their development it's at the start of the story. If they are the cold apathetic character the author want it to be, THAN LET THEM BE APATHETIC. I swear, some authors just wrote cold apathetic and couldn't careless about anyone else just to make their writing look cool. I'm not saying some writers can't write apathetic character, but please, if a character is selfish apathetic, then they are not going to step in because, again they're selfish.

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Elvynnx

Let me rant a bit : a x reader but the character that supposed to be the reader has a (full!!) name make me irritated.
          
          Like, that's supposed to be us not...your OC? The tittle is "X reader" but it feels like "X OC" please....ini pada tau konsep "X reader" ga si
          
          "Yaelah tinggal scroll aja klo ga suka" ya masalahnya itu udah plot nya bagus, cerita best lah malah readernya ada nama kan kek...hadeh, padahal mood nya lagi pen baca x reader ketemu nya x OC 
          
          Minimal pake nickname yang deskripsiin kita kek misalnya "Pocket" "Pix" "Pip" atau apa kek yang penting bukan nama OC nya klo gamau atau ga suka pake "[name]"/"Y/N"
          
          (maaf menyinggung, cuman opini saya aja)

NazraRW

@ Elvynnx  betul heh. Katanya Xreader tapi malah Xoc.
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