Assalamualaikum wa Rahma TullAhi Ta'ala wa barkatuhu,I just wanted to let you know that your story was amazing, I've lost count about how many times I've read it,you were just fabulous and so was your writing,it's as if one could clearly watch the characters and the words were displayed beautifully bringing each and every emotion out,it was just fabulous.
May Allah SWT bless you with more knowledge,health,wisdom and the ability to continue writing.
I wish you all the best.