Em Livesy

Yes asap 

@LynnButler4 Hi, everything alright? I'd like to say that I loved the book. And seeing some comments even about who she should end up with I think that with the two brothers Lincoln and Michael having an affair/relationship until she gives up, whoever stays with them... And I also saw in one of the last chapters the names of the men that seem I think they should vote for her to have an affair with all five of them. To give the story more prominence, she could interact with them at different times, or, I don't know, depending on what happens to her. I really wanted that. That she would find her grandfather's money and keep it so she could start her life over. And the rivalry with Sara is good too, I liked the clashes, confrontations, or the exchange of barbs and irony. Provocations Personally, I would find her beautiful as a redhead because there aren't many stories like that where the protagonist is a redhead. Most are brunette, blonde, or brown-haired; I think red hair suits her. I hope you see and understand what I said, okay? Please update this story soon, I'm anxious to see the first kiss between Lincoln and Olivia and to see what will happen to her relationship with Michael.

@GraceWilliam1995 hi Grace! I’m good thank you, hope you’re well too. Thank you for your messages! I’ve just written some new chapters that show the rivalry between Olivia and Sara for Michael so I hope you enjoy that. It carries on into the rest of the book too, so you’ll be able to see it develop more and more. As for the protagonists hair colour, I rarely mention it, it’s more for the gifs, but you are welcome to imagine her in anyway (redhead or otherwise) throughout. Olivia is also very torn between the two brothers, as you mentioned in your first comment, and this progresses throughout the chapters too, so I’m excited for you to see that 
            I understand the abuse from the guard is a triggering part, hence why I put a warning on the chapter. It’s rarely mentioned again throughout the rest of the book (only a couple of times) so don’t worry, it won’t be a reoccurring theme. I hope this helps, and answers your questions! Please feel free to send any further messages and/or feedback. I love hearing from my readers and hearing their thoughts and preferences for the story. Who do you prefer Olivia with… Michael or Lincoln?

@EmLivesy Hi, everything alright? I said that I had seen here that some users wanted the protagonist of the Prison Break story to be... If I were a redhead and not a blonde And that she not be abused by the police officer. And that it showed the rivalry between her and Sara for Michael And that she would be able to find her grandfather's money and become a millionaire. But it's just a few comments I saw.You understood

Hi Lynn! Thanks for all the love on my Chicago Fire story. I will be updating it at some point. I’m currently editing and adding to my Prison Break Fanfic, and I only do one story at a time, so will move on to Chicago Fire after that. In the meantime, I have a Chicago PD book which is both a Jay Halstead and Antonio Dawson fan fiction if that would interest you. Thank again, Em 

@_fanfic_addict Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! I will try to add him in more and give him more of a storyline soon :)

@EmLivesy when you will updated it 

@LynnButler4 hi Lynn, I am going to update it. I’m trying to finish Crossroads in Chicago first, but then I am planning on rewriting/editing and then adding to the Chicago Fire fanfic

@EmLivesy  are you going to update Chicago fire Kelly