To everyone reading Apartheid,
First of all, thank you so much from the depth of my heart, it means the world to me.
I'd just wanted to let you know that I'm still in the first stage of the editing process, which means I'm still rewriting and fixing plot holes, so without further ado, I'd like to clarify a couple of points out:
○ Chapters II - IX would be almost 100% rewritten, so those awkward or cringy dialogues or paragraphs are all in the process of enhancement or elimination, so please don't let it discourage you from reading on. In about a week or two, I'll have them fixed.
○ Vienna is Vaniza, and Richard is Rizwan.
I changed their names to match their racial background. It was easy to replace them all in the Word document at once, but here, they'll be gradually corrected with every rewritten chapter I republish.
○ Please excuse any grammar or punctuation mistake, there's a whole round of editing for that, I promise.
○ First drafts are clumsy and full of things to fix here and there, especially when it's completed over the course of multiple years since you get better at writing with time, so you might find a huge difference between my writing style at the beginning and at the end.
But this is why we edit, we make sure the first chapters are as good as the last ones and we polish the whole manuscript.
Thank you for bearing with me, I owe it to you all.
With love,
Your girl Eman.