Sarah

I'm editing all my books a I promise I will upload more :) :] 

Here is my critique for Bliss. It has a great story, but the grammar and imagery needs more work. A lot of words were mispelled and punctuational errors were constant. The sentences were confusing and not well organized. Your writing skipped from topic to topic and did not include much detail. Take it slow and listen to what you you are writing.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iB2aL6LtWNA&feature=fvst a song to wait for my first upload of the year :D 

I read and commented on your story but you still haven't done that on mine. Could you please do it? Thanks:)

@lilhottie1 yeah :D

@lilhottie1 Well im looking for a cool editor do u know one? 

@lilhottie1 i guess. Id be with him if were weren't real brother and sister. 

@lilhottie1 i like the book it's just u know she never freaked out bout her brotHer being her mate. I would have freked,scremed tried choking him. :D 

Hi guys u maybe don't remember me but im the girl who u became a fann of "Bliss { just call me angel and my mate wolf boy} & "age us nothing but a number to be with my mate" im sorry i haven't uploaded in a longggggg time but i will now i promise that i wont wait more than a moth to upload again. If u have any questions just write me or anything you want to read about just write.

I was going too lol. But I found a good one.