I decided that I am going to put up an excerpt from each of the chapters that I finish rewriting from "Not The Last" and odds are, these sentences will be nothing like they were in the original rough draft version that is on Wattpad. For example, there are going to be all new chapters that aren't in the book, but have some familiar content, so you'll probably end up seeing new chapter titles. I hope you guys still like it!
So here is a quick excerpt from Chapter 1: The Beginning
" Standing in the doorway of the classroom, were three people that seemed almost completely normal. Except, there were trails of blood along their clothing, accompanied by red splatters as well. Hell, had that been the only thing wrong with these people, I might have considered it normal compared to what was actually standing before us. The person standing near the front of the group had only one arm, the other one was cut, no, ripped, off at the shoulder, the tendons and bone hanging freely from the empty socket. The other two were just as grotesque, missing parts of their necks, faces, or bodies. But, not even that was as frightening as the bloodshot, empty eyes that seemed to focus directly on me.
There was a moment of complete still and silence, but every moment has to draw to a close eventually. The person with a missing arm suddenly let out a grotesque yell and began hobbling towards us. Luckily, I had recovered from the shock of the moment previous and realized that we had to move, and fast. I grabbed Miranda and jumped to my feet, yanking her along with me. After staring at the advancing people for a few seconds longer, she forced herself out of her thoughts and jumped into action. We had to find an exit, otherwise we were just trapped in this room, awaiting our fate."
So let me know what you guys think? My main thoughts toward doing this is to make the story a little more rounded with details and a fuller background of information. I am also building on the characters.