Ok so i just re- did ch.5 and 6 of my book! i think it will now make more sence and i think it sounds better than before. Let me know what you guys think plz! :) Thank you all so much for helping me prove to myself that even though i have an IEP in writting, i can still accomplish writting a book many people enjoy reading and even though i have very few fans, It still helps me push to creat greater goals and not look down at what i cant do all the time . So thank you all SOOOO SO SO much!!! :)