Emizuko

Currently writing the next chapter of Yumihiki! I just wanted to ask you guys something about the ending 
          	(I'm probably not gonna end it anytime soon, especially since I want to take things slow since I'm easing back into the rhythm of writing and posting fanfiction chapters)
          	
          	However, I was thinking that I would write a romantic ending for each of the characters (except for Luke, of course. I'll write a platonic ending chapter for Luke). If you want to romance more than one character, then you can read the romantic endings for all of the characters you want to romance as the endings won't connect to one another at all or directly mention other characters besides the one that the ending is focused on.
          	
          	And, for those of you who don't want a romantic ending at all, then I'm also planning on writing a platonic ending for all of the characters. I know that Yumihiki seems like it has strong undertones of romance in it, but I also intended to write it with undertones of strong platonic love (which may not have been as obvious)
          	(Kind of similar to Obey Me itself now that I think about it lmao)
          	
          	I'll write a platonic ending chapter dedicated to Luke solely so the readers can have a sweet, amiable moment with Luke. The actual "platonic ending" will be with all of the characters, if that makes sense. If you'd guys prefer, I can also write platonic endings with each of the characters individually, akin to the romantic endings.
          	
          	What do you guys think?

V1_Ultrakill_

@Emizuko whatever you make i'll read it since it's from you <3
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xoxo-winter

@Emizuko whatever is good for you! I think doing whatever is the least stressful for you works! I think the romantic endings sound nice, but whatever you wanna do, your the author!
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Emizuko

Currently writing the next chapter of Yumihiki! I just wanted to ask you guys something about the ending 
          (I'm probably not gonna end it anytime soon, especially since I want to take things slow since I'm easing back into the rhythm of writing and posting fanfiction chapters)
          
          However, I was thinking that I would write a romantic ending for each of the characters (except for Luke, of course. I'll write a platonic ending chapter for Luke). If you want to romance more than one character, then you can read the romantic endings for all of the characters you want to romance as the endings won't connect to one another at all or directly mention other characters besides the one that the ending is focused on.
          
          And, for those of you who don't want a romantic ending at all, then I'm also planning on writing a platonic ending for all of the characters. I know that Yumihiki seems like it has strong undertones of romance in it, but I also intended to write it with undertones of strong platonic love (which may not have been as obvious)
          (Kind of similar to Obey Me itself now that I think about it lmao)
          
          I'll write a platonic ending chapter dedicated to Luke solely so the readers can have a sweet, amiable moment with Luke. The actual "platonic ending" will be with all of the characters, if that makes sense. If you'd guys prefer, I can also write platonic endings with each of the characters individually, akin to the romantic endings.
          
          What do you guys think?

V1_Ultrakill_

@Emizuko whatever you make i'll read it since it's from you <3
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xoxo-winter

@Emizuko whatever is good for you! I think doing whatever is the least stressful for you works! I think the romantic endings sound nice, but whatever you wanna do, your the author!
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Emizuko

Oh, and also just a few more things (about Yumihiki):
          
          1. Some people expressed their distaste about the MC being expressed as shorter in one of the chapters. When I was writing the chapter, I intended for the brothers to be taller than MC as they canonly have no height yet are still depicted as quite tall. I will admit that I slipped up there and should have left it vague. However, the height was really only mentioned in that chapter (if I'm recalling correctly) and is not otherwise mentioned in the story, so if you want the MC to be taller than the brothers, then go ahead.
          
          2. I also noticed people expressing their distaste for how "dumb" or "dense" the MC is, particularly in the first few chapters when MC kept on encountering the brothers through the app. That's also something that I messed up on. This is my first ever reader-insert fanfiction and I wanted to add that for some "humorous moments" (which weren't quite humorous, honestly) and to drag the story a bit. Of course, I have matured as a writer, do I'll avoid the "dense MC" trope from now on in Yumihiki and in my future stories haha.
          
          That's all! Once again, thank you for the support ^^

Emizuko

(I sincerely apologize for the announcement ping lmao)
          
          Hey, guys. This is my first time checking Wattpad in a while (about a few months?)
          Yes, I'm alive. Sorry for disappearing on all of you out of the blue. I kept on making promises about updating Yumihiki soon, but I ended up disappearing off the face of the Earth instead lmao, so that's my bad.
          
          I initially left because I was beginning to get overwhelmed and unmotivated, but my really long hiatus recovered my motivation and I'd say I'm doing better than ever in terms of motivation (for writing). 
          
          So, on to the point. Since I'm getting back into writing, expect a Yumihiki update by either tomorrow or the day after that (keeping my promise this time). I want to take things slow to ensure that the chapter is actually good quality and not rushed because to be honest, the last few chapters were quite rushed and not my best work.
          
          As always, feel free to comment or critique any of my works. I might update my other stories as well or start new ones
          
          Thank you for sticking around and for all of the support <3

luv4samm

@Emizuko Glad you feel better now. :)) MISSED YOU TONS <333
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