Taylor

@Emma5373 hey, i loved the start of your book before she got dropped in the werewolf pack and met her mate. It was different and exciting, and i think it would be more interesting to try using those people and create a different story.  The rest kind of got to be ver cliche and like what everyone does.  But you definitely have a start with something unique if you maybe stay with the begining section and use those other animals and maybe make the story like she is a spy or she loses it on her captors and is lost in the world, doesnt know where she fits in... Human vs. Wolf... As they had her stay a wolf most of her life she would be a bit more wild...