HayleyHeberer

Hi Emma! This is Hayley, the author of Prey and Protect, She Devil, and a few more. I see you followed me recently and would like to thank you. I also would like to ask your opinion on any books that you have read and any advice on them. Feel free to message me anytime.

EmmaFollows

@HayleyHeberer In books, I long for the much used detail anf you did an amazing job. The action how ever was a little rocky. Maybe touch up on what's going on anf provide more speaking parts for the characters. I very much enjoyed your book and love the creativity you used within it! Put detail into the action anf thoughts of what the characters are thinking in that moment. Other than that, you did great! If you could, please read my newest book "Destined To Be," and tell me what I did great on and what I may need to improve on. There will be no hard feelings coming from my part. Thank you again and hope to talk to you real soon.
            
            ~~~Emma
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HayleyHeberer

@HayleyHeberer I completely understand being busy!! I'm so glad you liked it! Is there anything you suggest I work on? Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to reply and read my book!
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EmmaFollows

@HayleyHeberer Sorry for not replying sooner, I have been busy with my other books. I did read your book "Prey and Protect," I loved that book, and looking forward to more of your books! One thing that I do look for in books is the detail, so that I can relate it back to my books, and you do a splendid job of doing so. I look forward to talking to you soon
            
            ~~~Emma
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