EmmaLainge

I've had a go at writing in the first person and the present tense. (Definitely a learning curve.) At the risk of sounding like Sheldon Cooper, "This doesn't feel like my spot."

iamxena

Well, there are only so many times you can write 'I felt...' or 'I said...'. Your expression is immediately limited, so any decent attempt at first person deserves an award. It's a shame so many authors on Wattpad write their stories in multiple perspective first person without considering other options.
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EmmaLainge

@iamxena Thank you. I can't believe how uncomfortable it was "being" the character. I guess there's safety and distance when you're writing in the third person.
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iamxena

There are worse people to sound like... I think first person works well enough for your short story, but it does feel a little more awkward then your other works. Still, the story had all the elements it needed, and a good (?) twist at the end.
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EmmaLainge

I've had a go at writing in the first person and the present tense. (Definitely a learning curve.) At the risk of sounding like Sheldon Cooper, "This doesn't feel like my spot."

iamxena

Well, there are only so many times you can write 'I felt...' or 'I said...'. Your expression is immediately limited, so any decent attempt at first person deserves an award. It's a shame so many authors on Wattpad write their stories in multiple perspective first person without considering other options.
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EmmaLainge

@iamxena Thank you. I can't believe how uncomfortable it was "being" the character. I guess there's safety and distance when you're writing in the third person.
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iamxena

There are worse people to sound like... I think first person works well enough for your short story, but it does feel a little more awkward then your other works. Still, the story had all the elements it needed, and a good (?) twist at the end.
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awwthentic

Good day to you too Emma :)
          
          Im Sorry. i should have checked more thoroughly. i found it in google and i like it for your novel on first glance so i used it. I really have this issue in failing to make out with copyright images. They are so all over the net that it gets really hard to understand.
          
          Not a problem. i love to work on photoshop :D. i will try making another one for you..soon. i hope you have no issues with the font i used. I feel it suits your title. Its kinda dramatic and has a modern touch with that swirly look. I will be using the same font but if you don't like it i will change it.
          
          Have a Nice day.
          
          G~

EmmaLainge

I've created a contest for those who are interested in a little fun. http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/790964/Contests

awwthentic

This is what i made. its in in 2 shades. dark and light. 
            http://s27.postimg.org/g7qx6oneb/THOD_light.jpg
            http://s27.postimg.org/6tpl0mwkz/THOD_dark.jpg
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awwthentic

I want to enroll in for this contest. :)
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DarcyConroy

@EmmaLainge Oh dear, yes. Sorry lol You know me, if it's Mike's first day back at work for the week, that must mena it's Monday! I mean Thursday :)
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CLLeMay

Hi love, so I started rereading THOD on my phone and I have a hard time voting there so I punched in my votes here. I will come back to comment, but I just wanted to come by and say the story's structure is absolutely delightful it is such a pleasure to read. When I need a great woman's lit to distract me and allow me an escape, I venture to Barbara Delinsky. The author is a very lovely lady with mad writing skills. The only difference between the two of you is your own distinct voice. 
          Charming, heart-wrenching, and mysterious. Excellent work, Emma.

EmmaLainge

Ohh! Thank you Cathy! Your unexpected compliment has made my day. I'm glad I'm still awake to have received it tonight!
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EmmaLainge

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
          
          I've entered "The Heart of Deception" into the 2013 Wattys Awards, so if you feel its good enough, please go back and vote and comment on your favourite chapters. The books with the most reads, comments and votes attract the attention of the judges.
          
          Thanks for reading. Keep in touch.
          
          Emma