Hi, I don't know that you'll reply my comment or not but I want to state one thing to you that's bugging me since I read your book love lifeline's that the female protagonist Kimberly has once not confronted male protagonist Cole about his cheat on her and inwardly accepts the new arrangements and reflects her feelings towards the male protagonist which she should not, like who in the world not addresses the actions of the cheating man/ woman and still shows feelings towards the person and to top of that the male protagonist reason is pathetic that he misses her that's why he did!!. Cheating was the option for him a choice for him which he chose for himself, it was not a mistake. It broughts the factor of loyalty towards Kimberly. It's your book it's your story but address this thing do not make things easy for Cole to worm back in the life of Kimberly even he can use their son as the leverage for her. You have shown Kimberly as sweet , naïve, kind , sexy and" feisty "when the situation comes but not when she's around the Sex God Cole, show her replling towards his actions in past p.s in the bar when blonde bimbo sat on his lap. Hope you'll reply and consider this recommendation. Be goodness around you. P.s sorry if I have written the name of book incorrect.