Emma_potatoe

Hey guys 
          	Can I please have some opinions on my book I don't care if there bad I just want to improve it I want to know weather or not to add a new character or not also I'm thinking of doing a book of another characters point of view in the book thumbs up or down???

Emma_potatoe

Hey guys 
          Can I please have some opinions on my book I don't care if there bad I just want to improve it I want to know weather or not to add a new character or not also I'm thinking of doing a book of another characters point of view in the book thumbs up or down???