Emmy-Fox

My loyal readers, come here real quick 
          	You’ve read my other stories, so NOW I need your honest opinion —
          	How are you feeling about the story I’ve written?
          	Be honest, be chaotic, be dramatic. I’m ready. 
          	Tell me everything. 

SunshineDreamersky

@Emmy-Fox hey there so I've been reading you stories from May and tbh your plot and storyline are really interesting but I want more emotions, characters and reactions like events are happening but I'm not able to connect it or feel anything  for characters its like too flat as if I'm listening a story from 3 rd pov, sorry if I'm being harsh but I really loved your ideas
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Emmy-Fox

My loyal readers, come here real quick 
          You’ve read my other stories, so NOW I need your honest opinion —
          How are you feeling about the story I’ve written?
          Be honest, be chaotic, be dramatic. I’m ready. 
          Tell me everything. 

SunshineDreamersky

@Emmy-Fox hey there so I've been reading you stories from May and tbh your plot and storyline are really interesting but I want more emotions, characters and reactions like events are happening but I'm not able to connect it or feel anything  for characters its like too flat as if I'm listening a story from 3 rd pov, sorry if I'm being harsh but I really loved your ideas
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