EmmyMikayla

guys its been a while since i updated my story should i or just delete it?
          	

beautylieswithinu

hi bby.
          so for a first attempt, it's really good :-))
          i'd say that u could work on the grammar and punctuation, stuff like that. and maybe do some research on depression and things related. statistics and stuff couldnt hurt, u know? i mean, ik that a lot of writers on wattpad do research before they start a story ((including myself)), so it would deffo make u seem more professional :-))
          ily x