Hey dude Im returning to the azur lane fandom and found your books and imo your writing is good, plot not sure yet and potential is high. But I would like to give advice. 1 dont make fanfics if you know your not going to finish it because people whenever they read a fanfic, they will check the author and will search whether you make long fanfics or short ones and then abandone them. Dont fall into common traps like harem or op mc because it wont be fun to read and people will drop the book. So hope you can make it and remember im just an advisor.