EmpireSunIncinerator

@MGCJoan lol, I remember my first time starting out (not here but over on fanfiction.net) and I didn't space...at all!!!! It was one giant disaster!!! You didn't know who was saying what and I kept reusing the word 'said' it was a nightmare!!! Luckily some constructive criticism from a reviewer helped with that!!!

Lol than a huge thank you!lol I do need to edit it more and things though :)

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