Empress_Shad0w

Ok I need to vent, I'm so sorry about this..
          	
          	OK so the Aidesse story I'm currently writing has about 60-70 chapters and counting. (Idk why it's so long but eh) and most of the chapters are basically repeats of the chapter before but with different dialogues and stuff. How'd I manage to mess up like that? IDK!! I was editing my chapters today and realised that this story is not only boring, but IT MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL! Aiden seems bipolar by how he acts since the chapters are so jumbled up (like he goes from cold and rude to teasing, and then cold again). Another thing is that chapter 6 is when one of them gets the artifact and wins, and when both Jesse and Aiden heads back, that takes about 20 or more chapters!! Where's the logic in that!?? How's that even possible?? What the hell was I thinking when I wrote this?? Not only that, weeks later after I wrote the chapters all up and realised I should get some help from ChatGPT, (because c'mon who wouldn't?) it managed to help a bit, but it also made me come up with an interesting plot twist! Sounds good right? WRONGGG! THE PLOT TWIST IS DIFFICULT TO SLIP IN TO THE STORY BECAUSE YOU HAVE TO BUILD IT UP TO THE PLOT TWIST AND I CAN'T SINCE I'VE ALREADY WRITTEN MOST OF THE CHAPTERS UNLESS I HAVE TO REWRITE LITERALLY EVERYTHING, AND EVEN IF I DID MANAGE A WAY TO WRITE IT UP, IDK IF IT WOULD BE BEST IF I SHOULD WRITE IT IN THIS ONE OR MAKE UP A BOOK TWO. Bro Idk what I'm doing anymore!
          	
          	(Again, sorry about that)

Empress_Shad0w

@Taekooks_child_69 True, can't argue with that XD (lmaoo yh same)
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Taekooks_child_69

@Empress_Shad0w at least I made you laugh  
          	  (I again remember F*****)
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EchoingSword

Wait, you're an INFP?? SO AM I!! :3

EchoingSword

@Empress_Shad0w Ooh these are really good traits I embrace too!! INFPs for the win!
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Empress_Shad0w

@EchoingSword Niceee! Well for me, you've named pretty much all of them lol, but I also like how we're open minded and curious- loving to learn and discover, and being open to adapting our viewpoints in light of new information or experiences! :DD
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EchoingSword

@Empress_Shad0w I like how we're open to interpretations, creative and sometimes being a perfectionist is good too :) Wbu?
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Empress_Shad0w

Ok I need to vent, I'm so sorry about this..
          
          OK so the Aidesse story I'm currently writing has about 60-70 chapters and counting. (Idk why it's so long but eh) and most of the chapters are basically repeats of the chapter before but with different dialogues and stuff. How'd I manage to mess up like that? IDK!! I was editing my chapters today and realised that this story is not only boring, but IT MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL! Aiden seems bipolar by how he acts since the chapters are so jumbled up (like he goes from cold and rude to teasing, and then cold again). Another thing is that chapter 6 is when one of them gets the artifact and wins, and when both Jesse and Aiden heads back, that takes about 20 or more chapters!! Where's the logic in that!?? How's that even possible?? What the hell was I thinking when I wrote this?? Not only that, weeks later after I wrote the chapters all up and realised I should get some help from ChatGPT, (because c'mon who wouldn't?) it managed to help a bit, but it also made me come up with an interesting plot twist! Sounds good right? WRONGGG! THE PLOT TWIST IS DIFFICULT TO SLIP IN TO THE STORY BECAUSE YOU HAVE TO BUILD IT UP TO THE PLOT TWIST AND I CAN'T SINCE I'VE ALREADY WRITTEN MOST OF THE CHAPTERS UNLESS I HAVE TO REWRITE LITERALLY EVERYTHING, AND EVEN IF I DID MANAGE A WAY TO WRITE IT UP, IDK IF IT WOULD BE BEST IF I SHOULD WRITE IT IN THIS ONE OR MAKE UP A BOOK TWO. Bro Idk what I'm doing anymore!
          
          (Again, sorry about that)

Empress_Shad0w

@Taekooks_child_69 True, can't argue with that XD (lmaoo yh same)
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Taekooks_child_69

@Empress_Shad0w at least I made you laugh  
            (I again remember F*****)
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