I have been wanting to read this kind of storyline since forever. You are doing great. I don't actually read ongoing novels. Feels like a cat is scratching my heart every time I wait for an update. But I can definitely wait for an amazing ongoing novel, and yours is worth the wait. I will be with you on this journey.
Your writing style is good.
There are not necessarily any grammatical mistakes.
It's just the start, but the story feels well-rounded right now.
Well done.