i love your pfp, your stories & everything. it reminds me of how wattpad used to be before. i love people like you <3. don't stop writing and you'll soon improve more. u are a good writer and have a very good plots with ur stories too, the problem is how u write it.
make sure to check some errors and grammars and when making paragraphs you have to cut some of them to give that thrilling effect xd
just some tips because i used to write like how u write now <33