hi! thank you for acknowledging my comment. you are one of the very, very few writers to whom i wrote my comments at the end of their stories who have indicated that they read my comments. i really believe that anyone can write, but not anyone can use the right words to convey the idea, the feelings that they want their readers to feel. and you were one of those few writers.
i also read your sequel, the marriage contract - honeymoon. but, i was left "hanging", like being suspended in the air when finding out that you only wrote 3 chapters and the date last updated was around 5 yrs. ago. did you finish updating in another website? you know, i read novels online almost the whole day since i'm one of those under "house arrest" i.e. i'm included in those asked by our health dept. to stay home to prevent covid contamination. i felt pity for james in not wanting dorothy to be by his side while he was going to have his treatment, much less in a farther place - hawaii. i know that cancer is a disease that needs to have as much moral support from his/her loved ones and i've seen some friends who recovered from the disease because of the strong support given them by their loved one. can you tell me where i can find the ending of your story? thanks!
